I could smell the sweet cotton candy as I walk past.
I could taste the sour blueberry sherbet as I pop it into my mouth.
I could hear the loud rain as it crashes to the ground with a loud splat.
I could feel the smooth soap I rubbed it against my fingers.
I could see colourful signs as I walk past them.
I could smell the strawberry lip balm as I open the lid.
I could taste the delicious chocolate as I put it into my mouth.
I could hear laughter in the crowd of kids.
I could I could hear the soft cotton candy in my hands.
I could see people going crazy from the cotton candy and sherbet.
I could hear coins going ting, ting, ting in people's pockets.
I could feel the bumpy coins in my pocket as I get it from my pocket.
I could see the creative bookmarks besides our table.
I could feel the soft pillows on the table.
What a day!
Hi Kate my name is Kirsten (i'm your twin Sister so you know me)
ReplyDeleteGreat job. I loved your senses writing. I loved how you said I could tast the sour blueberry as it pops in my mouth. I really liked your describing words. Keep up the good work. Bye.
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Hi Kirsten,
ReplyDeleteSorry for the very late the reply( after a year I answered you)
Thank you for checking my blog. Thank you, that simile too.
Bye I will check out you blog keep on checking out my blog.
Kate